Monday, August 9, 2010

Would any native speakers help me with this? Are there correct in English (part3)?

The winds and clouds is miserably thin, the sun and moon have no light, green mountain bowed head, the big river sobs. The local person write a song for memory of general Yang Jingyu, such decenber days in winter, pines are green and leafy, and our hero Yang Jingyu, will be alive eternal. Due to acrious, Japanese Army transport the body of general Yang to Shen Yang and dissection, The result sent a chill up their spine, there is no food in general鈥檚 stomach. General satisfacted hunger with cotton and grass root in almost a month. And this make the pretentious Janpan imperialism impressed by chinese people鈥檚 nation will and highly militant spirit. The victory is belong to China and evil will never triumph over the justice at all.



Would any native speakers help me with this? Are there correct in English (part3)?house call



The wind and clouds are dreary and thin , the sun and moon sheds no light, the mountain is green but there is no joy ,even the rivers sound is of sadness. A countryman writes a song in memory of General Yang Jigyu, As December days turn to spring and pine trees grow green and leafy , So will our hero Yang Jingyu memory go on forever . When our hero died in action the Japanese transported the body of General Yang to Shen Yang to be dissected, The result sent fear through the Japanese , all they found in the Generals stomach was grass root and Cotton that was all he had consumed in a month . Only then did the imperialist Japanese realise what they were up against a Chinese nation determined at all costs to resist defeat,even starvation and death would not stop them . and that Justice will always triumph over evil

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